I’ve seen worse than this, and I admire the use of white space. But here’s a few tips.

1. You don’t need a P next to the phone and an E next to the email. People know what they are.

2. “Cheap Gun Transfers” is a better headline. Remember, people are lazy, don’t make them read more than they have to.

3. The target logo looks an awful lot like the logo of Target the discount store. Watch out!